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Example of a simple love poem

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The beauty I find in her sweet, gentle eyes
makes me feel as if I could leap up, and fly.
  Her voice as sweet as the Siren's song,
I could listen to it all day long.
  Her skin is smooth, soft, and fine.
I would hold her hand 'till the end of time.
  She happens to be the love of my life,
[So I'm asking her now, will you be my wife?] - Proposal
[And maybe one day, I'll make her my wife] - Teen commitment
[She makes me feel like everything's right] - Sweet
I came up with this one to be useful to more than one group of people. I couldn't decide on which ending line to use, so I came to the decision that the person to give the poem to their significant other would be able to select the ending that fits their current relationship

I won't be putting more examples up frequently, because I want to sell my work, not show it all for free. My hope is that now you have an idea of what you might expect for certain purchases, and will want to buy a commission now and then.

Once again, I do poems, short stories, lyrics re-writes, and letters to that person you can't speak to because you can't find the words to express how you feel. These letters can be out of anger, love, or you just wanted to tell them something, but the way you worded it in that Facebook message looked awful. I also do grammar and spell check for assignments and short stories (under ten pages).

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soft-thorns's avatar
mabye a funny ending would be cool too. i love it though.